Saturday, February 20, 2010

Lead#4a: Smoking Wheels(REVISED)

Forty passengers had to evacuate today from a Northwest Airlines jet at the LaCrosse, Wis., Municipal Airport because smoke was spotted near the wheels of the plane.
On flight number 428, the passengers were forced to evacuate after a landing tower employee spotted the smoke near the wheels.

1 comment:

  1. Your lead is better, but you have the "smoke near the wheels" info in both paragraphs -- that's redundant.

    7+1=8/10

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