Forty passengers had to evacuate today from a Northwest Airlines jet at the LaCrosse, Wis., Municipal Airport because smoke was spotted near the wheels of the plane.
On flight number 428, the passengers were forced to evacuate after a landing tower employee spotted the smoke near the wheels.
Saturday, February 20, 2010
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Your lead is better, but you have the "smoke near the wheels" info in both paragraphs -- that's redundant.
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