40 passengers had to evacuate today from a Northwest Airlines jet.
After a landing tower employee spotted smoke near the wheels of flight # 428 at the LaCrosse, Wis., Municipal airport, the passengers were forced to evacuate the plane.
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Don't start a sentence with a numeral -- spell it out.
ReplyDeleteYou haven't included enough information in your lead. Readers will want to know where this incident took place and why the plane was evacuated. You can fit all that in your lead.
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