1. To Ensure the accuracy of the news story, Susan Jones check with Her source. For Jones, this is an everyday practice not an exception.
2. As the two boys argued over who should have the last piece of pizza, they both seemed equally as hungry. Clearly they had forgtten their earlier decision to forego having seconds.
3.He suspected his neighbor was selling drugs, so he called the FBI. However his neighbor then cried fowl at the accusation.
4. She grew up on the great plains, near Alliance, New England. Where the long and harsh winter living goes hand to mouth.
5. Her Car was sideswiped by a hit- and-run driver on Route 1-A this morning. She was not really injured, but the impact sent the contents of her purse helter-skelter.
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1) Good - but don't capitalize your corrected words; I can find them.
ReplyDelete2) equally hungry (delete "as"); forgo (-2)
3) "then" is not needed; cried foul, not fowl (-1)
4) ... the Great Plains, near Alliance, Neb., where .... (Don't rewrite the sentences; just find and correct the errors.) (-2)
5) Why are you capitalizing the word "car"? Don't make me take off points when you add errors. Route 1A (no hyphen) (-1)
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