Saturday, February 20, 2010
Fact Set#1: Pipe fitter(Revised)
On Wednesday afternoon a pipe fitter employed by Gross Engineers, was installing new pipes on the roof of the Springfield Municipal power plant when he suffered third-degree burns after accidentally touching a power line that carried 15,000 volts with a piece of angle iron.
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Start your lead with "what" happened, not when. The guy's employer is not that important; that info belongs later in the story, not in the beginning of the lead.
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