Saturday, February 20, 2010

Lead#3B:Accidental Death (REVISED)

The cause of death of a woman found at a Pacifica golf course last month was accidental drowning, the San Mateo County coroner announced yesterday.
Laura Smythe died at thirty four years old. Her body was found in Sharp Park Golf Course by a local hiker Robert Foster, said there was nothing to indicate that Smythe's death was not accidental.
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2010 at 3:04 PM

    Better!

    You can still tighten up your second paragraph: The body of Laura Smythe, 34, was found in Sharp Park Golf Course by a local hiker. County Coroner Robert Foster said there was nothing to indicate that Smythe's death was not accidental.

    8.5+0.5=9/10

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