Saturday, February 6, 2010

Lead #2: Highway Closed

SeveraltTrees had fallen across Highway 9. just west of Saratoga at Pierce Road yesterday night. Using Caltrans to close highway for nine hours to clear road.
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 9, 2010 at 11:10 AM

    This one's got problems: typos, sentence fragments, buried "what" info.

    Here's one way to start a good lead for this fact set:
    Falling trees forced CalTrans officials to close .... (Now it's your turn to finish this lead ... and remember to proofread!)

    3/5

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